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Voltage Ep 1: Shocking Beginnings Part 1

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[Fade into a city]

[Ease in more in the city]

Narrator: Ok think of this scenario, you a normal kid, well teenager and you just live a normal little life. You go to school, have friends, get grounded by your parents you know the usual stuff, but imagine one day that all that change.

[A car gets thrown into a building]

[We people running in the streets]

Policemen: Hurry, everyone get out of this area.

[Cut to a flying figure throwing fiery dark ball of flames at a car]

[Cut and pander down to a man in a costume and a little boy hiding behind the car]

Narrator: Ok now you see that guy in the cool costume that's me Tim Solomon and that kid besides me well it's someone that I was supposed to safe, well it safe to tell you that we both need saving by this shadowy flying figure.

[Pander up onto the shadowy figure]

Shadowy Figure: HA HA HA HA what happened to all that big talk about being a hero.

[Shadowy figure throws another  fiery dark ball of flames]

Shadowy Figure: But all I see is a coward.

[Tim looks at the little boy with tears in his eyes]

[Kid looks terrified]

Tim: Hey kid look at me.

[Kid looks at Tim]
Tim: Don't worry, I'm going to get us out of this, we're going to be fine.

Shadowy Figure: Don't worry your deaths will be quick and painless.

Tim Narrates: Yeah so as you can see I'm in a bit of a pickle right now. Hard to believe what could happen in two days.

TWO DAY AGO

[Tim yarns]

Voice: Tim hurry up, you don't want to be late for school today.

Tim: Alright mom I'm getting ready now.

Tim: Another day, another boring life of Timothy M. Solomon

Tim: Later mom, I'm out!

Mom: Hold it young man

Mom: You forgot your lunch.

[Tim opens the bag and sniff in it]

Tim: Mmm baloney and cheese, my favorite. Thanks.

Mom: Now I want you to enjoy yourself on this trip to Drake Industries and actually learn something there.

Tim: Aw come on mom you know Arshell is the one that into that stuff.

Mom: And she has a good reason, Drake Industries creates some of the latest technology, technology that may I remind you, you have crammed up in your room.

Tim: Yeah, but that doesn't mean I have any interest on how they make it.

Mom: Just go boy.

[Tim opens the and pops his head open]

[He looks left and right on my side of the street]

Tim: Clear for take off.

[Tim goes out side and closes the door behind him]

[Tim crosses the sidewalk to the other side to walk to school]

[Tim looks around nervously]

[Tim starts having a calm face]

Tim: Phew looks like the coast is...

[Someone whistle's in the background]

Tim: clear...oh really.

[Tim turns in head to the right side of the street]

[He see's a teenager with a blue shirt leaning on a tree eying him down]

[The teenager starts coming towards Tim]

[Tim instantly starts running]

[The teenager with a blue shirt starts running after him]

[teenager with a blue shirt chases after Tim throughout the neighborhood]

[Tim hops a fence]

[teenager with a blue shirt hops the same fence]

[A dog starts barking]

Teenager with a blue shirt: Hey..whoa, whoa, hey!

[ Teenager with a blue shirt hopes back over the fence]

[Teenager with a blue shirt looks back]

[A dog barks on the other side of the fence]
Dog: Woof, woof,woof,woof

Teenager with a blue shirt: Get lost you stupid dog.

[Pan back to see Tim hiding behind a tree]

Tim: Good boy Rex, knew offering to walk that dog would come in handing one day.

[Tim runs towards another fence and hops over it]

[Cut and pan into Philly State High School]

[Cut to a teenage girl at her looker garbing some books]

[She closes her looker door]

Tim: ARSHELL!

Arshell: Ah!...Jesus Tim don't scare me like that.

Tim: Sorry...about...that.

Arshell: It's Ace again isn't.

Tim: How...can..you tell.

Arshell: Ace have been on you for how many years, I think I can tell when your running out of trouble.

Tim: Well not this time, this time I feel like I dodged him this time.

Ace: Hey Solomon!

[Tim has a shocked look on his face]

Tim: Oh god really?

[Tim turns around and see's Ace marching towards him with any angry face on him]

Tim: Ace man I...

[Ace grabs him and shoves Tim into the lookers]
Ace: You think it's funny what you did with that little stunt with that dog.

Tim: What that, hey don't blame me your not good with dogs like I am.

[Ace shoves Tim in the lookers again]

Ace: Well, Well, looks like we have a funny man over here.

Ace: When I'm done rearranging your face it won't be a a laughing matter anymore.

[Ace balls up his fist and pulls back]

[Arshell grabs Ace's arm]

Arshell: Ok Ace that's enough, I will get the teachers if you don't stop.

[Ace looks at Arshell and looks back at Tim]

[Ace let's Tim go]

[Ace looks at Arshell]

Ace: Your lucky your cute

[Ace looks back at Tim]

Ace: And you got off lucky this time.

[Ace walks away]

Tim: Thanks, I owe you one.

Aarshell: Don't mention it,

[They both start walking to class]

Arshell: So are you ready for the big trip today.

Tim: Don't remind me, I would rather take a five page essay on Jupiter then go on this stupid trip.




Tim: Interested in the final product not how they make it. That's your business. Your the one who's interested in that stuff.

Arshell:  Drake Industries creates some of the latest technology and for someone who has their technology crammed up in your room I'm surprised your not interested in going.

Tim: You know my Mom said the exact same thing.

Arshell: She's right you know.

[Cut outside to Drake Industries]

[Cut to inside Drake Industries]

Random women: Welcome children. Since 1969 Drake Industries, INC has been dedicated to providing innovative materials for manufacturing, military defense, bio-medical and chemical research and technology. We are a leading global manufacturer.

Tim: Yawn, boring.

[Arshell nudges Tim's arm hard]

Tim: Ow

Arshell: Quiet

Random Woman: Drake Industries operates about one hundred and ten major manufacturing and seven research  and development facilities worldwide.

Ethan Drake: Actually it's one hundred and twelve major manufacturing and ten research  and development facilities worldwide, but who's counting.

Random Woman: Oh, Mr. Drake I wasn't expecting you.

Ethan Drake: Welcome children, I am very happy you all have come today.

?????: Ahem

Ethan Drake: Sorry, this young man right here is my son Thomas.
Thomas: Today is a day.

Ethan Drake: That's right, because today I test out the companies latest ________. Let me ask you all a question, have you ever wondered what is out their in the universe? Go further were no man have gone before? Well that's what we're trying to find out.

Thomas: We're creating interstellar travel!

[The group of students look at one another]

Arshell: Whoa

Tim: OK, now I'm interested.

Ethan: And today you will be the first people in the public eye to witness this extraordinary event. Now if you would please follow me.

[We see Arshell cutting in front of the other students]

Arshell: Excuse me Mr. Drake sir, Arshell Dixion, um, how exactly this this idea came to you and how do you plan on doing this?

Tim: There she goes again.

Ethan: Well I'm glad you asked, you see three months ago one of my scientist discovered a wormhole that apparently lead to a completely new dimension.

Arshell: Really?

Ethan: That's right, but to prove that it will truly be a success, we build a satellite and launched it in space through the wormhole and once activated the satellite will open a gate from our position to it's.

Arshell: Through our position where?

[Ethan points at something]

Ethan: Through that.

[Cut to the shot of a portal]

[The students gases in amazement]
Arshell: Is that like a portal?

Thomas: It is, the satellite is connected to the portal door, so when the satellite activates it will open a doorway from its location through the portal.

Thomas: And we have one of NASA's bravest astronauts to participate on the voyage.

[Thomas points at someone]

Thomas: Brad Banner himself.

[Cut to Brad Banner's face]

Random Girl 1: Did he say Brad Banner!

Random Girl 2: AAAAAAHHHHHH he's such a hunk.

Random Girl 3: I know right!

Random Girl 4: We love you Brad!

[Brad looks up at the crowd and waves at them]

Every girl in the crowd: AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH

Tim: Now you got hem started.

[A voice from a speaker starts talking]

Voice 1: Mr. Drake sir we are ready to begin.

Ethan: Ah that's my cue, I better be going now, let's go Thomas.

Thomas: Actually Dad, I think I'll stay up here with the other students.

[Ethan starts having confused look on his face]

[Thomas stairs back at his father]

Ethan: Very well then, any children please enjoy the test, it's going to be something you'll never forget.

[ Ethan walks off to the control room]

[Brad gets into his astronaut suit and everyone clears the room the portal is in]

Scientist: We're ready to be begin.

Ethan: Do it, activate the satellite.

[Scientist presses a button to activate the satellite]

[Cut to the satellite floating in space and pan in]

[A light starts blinking on the satellite and a beam of light shoots from it and creates a doorway.]

[Cut to Drake Industries where and alarm on the portal starts going off. The portal opens]

Ethan: Alright Brad, go on through.

[Brad looks up at Ethan Drake and gives him a thumbs up and heads through the portal]

[Brad makes it to the other side]

Brad: Alright, I made it through the portal.

Scientist: Sir he made it through.

[Cut to a monitor hooked to a webcam in Brad's helmet where everyone can see]

Scientist: Ok Brad do you see anything.

Brad: Nothing really, nothing but space and....wait.

Brad: Is that a planet?

Ethan: A planet!

[Cut to monitor showing the planet]

Random Person 1: A new planet.

Random Person 2: Incredible.

Random Person 3: Mr. Drake has done it again.

Arshell: This is insane, Tim do you see this,can you believe this.

Tim: I'm seeing, but I'm still trying to believe.

Arshell: They not only perfected interstellar travel, but they discovered a new planet.

Thomas: Well, Well.

[Tim and Arshell both looks at Thomas]

Thomas: He was actually capable of pulling it off, and here I thought he couldn't.

[Cut back to Brad in space]

Brad: Wait somethings wrong.

Ethan: What is it Brad?

Brad: The planet....it's cracking?

Ethan: Cracking, what you mean cracking?

Brad: It's like what I said it's...Oh god!

[A thunderous explosion erupted from the planet and a light glistened]

[Brad covers his eyes]

[Cut back to Drake Industries, everyone is covering their eyes from the blinding light]

Arshell: I can't see a thing.

Tim: Me either.

Ethan: Brad are you there?

[Cut back to space]

[The lights starts fading]

Brad: Yeah I'm still here, I can start to see again.

Brad: “gasp”

Brad: The planet is gone.

Ethan: WHAT!

[Cut to the destroyed planet]

Brad: The planet is destroyed!

Ethan: How can that be, a planet can't just destroy itself out of nowhere.

Brad: Hey I see something else coming.

[Cut back to the destroyed planet]

[Colored lights rushed towards Brad]

Brad: Something's coming towards me, pull me back in.

[Cut back to Drake Industries, inside the control room]

Ethan: You heard him, pull him back in.

Scientist 1: Yes sir.

[Scientist pushes button to activate crane mechanism to pull Brad back]

[Brad starts getting pulled back]

[The colored lights are coming closer to Brad and the portal]

Brad: I'm close to the portal, get ready to close it.

[Brad is in the door way of the portal, then one of the lights hits him and knocks him out]

[Hundreds of colored lights scattered around the facility]
Ethan: What in the world?

Ethan: Close the doors NOW!

[Scientist 1 pushes a button to close the door, the portal door closes]

Ethan: Someone escort the children out of the building.

Random Women: Yes, children come this way.

[Thomas looked as the students as they are escorted outside]

[Thomas turns around to go to the control room]

[One of the light attacked Thomas]

Thomas: AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!

[Tim stops and turns around, looks up, and see's Thomas body floating in a purple shadowy fire]

[Tim turns his head right and a yellow light coming towards him]

Tim: AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!

[Tim passes out]

To Be Continued....
I have decided to something completely different from what I usually do. I have decided to get into more writing, this is the first time I really wrote anything to this capacity. So to start it off I written the first draft of the Voltage narrative.
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NRGPreview's avatar
You've got the format down, and the plot seems to be solid. Keep it up!