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[Fade into a city]
[Ease in more in the city]
Narrator: Ok think of this scenario, you a normal kid, well teenager and you just live a normal little life. You go to school, have friends, get grounded by your parents you know the usual stuff, but imagine one day that all that change.
[A car gets thrown into a building]
[We people running in the streets]
Policemen: Hurry, everyone get out of this area.
[Cut to a flying figure throwing fiery dark ball of flames at a car]
[Cut and pander down to a man in a costume and a little boy hiding behind the car]
Narrator: Ok now you see that guy in the cool costume that's me Tim Solomon and that kid besides me well it's someone that I was supposed to safe, well it safe to tell you that we both need saving by this shadowy flying figure.
[Pander up onto the shadowy figure]
Shadowy Figure: HA HA HA HA what happened to all that big talk about being a hero.
[Shadowy figure throws another fiery dark ball of flames]
Shadowy Figure: But all I see is a coward.
[Tim looks at the little boy with tears in his eyes]
[Kid looks terrified]
Tim: Hey kid look at me.
[Kid looks at Tim]
Tim: Don't worry, I'm going to get us out of this, we're going to be fine.
Shadowy Figure: Don't worry your deaths will be quick and painless.
Tim Narrates: Yeah so as you can see I'm in a bit of a pickle right now. Hard to believe what could happen in two days.
TWO DAY AGO
[Tim yarns]
Voice: Tim hurry up, you don't want to be late for school today.
Tim: Alright mom I'm getting ready now.
Tim: Another day, another boring life of Timothy M. Solomon
Tim: Later mom, I'm out!
Mom: Hold it young man
Mom: You forgot your lunch.
[Tim opens the bag and sniff in it]
Tim: Mmm baloney and cheese, my favorite. Thanks.
Mom: Now I want you to enjoy yourself on this trip to Drake Industries and actually learn something there.
Tim: Aw come on mom you know Arshell is the one that into that stuff.
Mom: And she has a good reason, Drake Industries creates some of the latest technology, technology that may I remind you, you have crammed up in your room.
Tim: Yeah, but that doesn't mean I have any interest on how they make it.
Mom: Just go boy.
[Tim opens the and pops his head open]
[He looks left and right on my side of the street]
Tim: Clear for take off.
[Tim goes out side and closes the door behind him]
[Tim crosses the sidewalk to the other side to walk to school]
[Tim looks around nervously]
[Tim starts having a calm face]
Tim: Phew looks like the coast is...
[Someone whistle's in the background]
Tim: clear...oh really.
[Tim turns in head to the right side of the street]
[He see's a teenager with a blue shirt leaning on a tree eying him down]
[The teenager starts coming towards Tim]
[Tim instantly starts running]
[The teenager with a blue shirt starts running after him]
[teenager with a blue shirt chases after Tim throughout the neighborhood]
[Tim hops a fence]
[teenager with a blue shirt hops the same fence]
[A dog starts barking]
Teenager with a blue shirt: Hey..whoa, whoa, hey!
[ Teenager with a blue shirt hopes back over the fence]
[Teenager with a blue shirt looks back]
[A dog barks on the other side of the fence]
Dog: Woof, woof,woof,woof
Teenager with a blue shirt: Get lost you stupid dog.
[Pan back to see Tim hiding behind a tree]
Tim: Good boy Rex, knew offering to walk that dog would come in handing one day.
[Tim runs towards another fence and hops over it]
[Cut and pan into Philly State High School]
[Cut to a teenage girl at her looker garbing some books]
[She closes her looker door]
Tim: ARSHELL!
Arshell: Ah!...Jesus Tim don't scare me like that.
Tim: Sorry...about...that.
Arshell: It's Ace again isn't.
Tim: How...can..you tell.
Arshell: Ace have been on you for how many years, I think I can tell when your running out of trouble.
Tim: Well not this time, this time I feel like I dodged him this time.
Ace: Hey Solomon!
[Tim has a shocked look on his face]
Tim: Oh god really?
[Tim turns around and see's Ace marching towards him with any angry face on him]
Tim: Ace man I...
[Ace grabs him and shoves Tim into the lookers]
Ace: You think it's funny what you did with that little stunt with that dog.
Tim: What that, hey don't blame me your not good with dogs like I am.
[Ace shoves Tim in the lookers again]
Ace: Well, Well, looks like we have a funny man over here.
Ace: When I'm done rearranging your face it won't be a a laughing matter anymore.
[Ace balls up his fist and pulls back]
[Arshell grabs Ace's arm]
Arshell: Ok Ace that's enough, I will get the teachers if you don't stop.
[Ace looks at Arshell and looks back at Tim]
[Ace let's Tim go]
[Ace looks at Arshell]
Ace: Your lucky your cute
[Ace looks back at Tim]
Ace: And you got off lucky this time.
[Ace walks away]
Tim: Thanks, I owe you one.
Aarshell: Don't mention it,
[They both start walking to class]
Arshell: So are you ready for the big trip today.
Tim: Don't remind me, I would rather take a five page essay on Jupiter then go on this stupid trip.
Tim: Interested in the final product not how they make it. That's your business. Your the one who's interested in that stuff.
Arshell: Drake Industries creates some of the latest technology and for someone who has their technology crammed up in your room I'm surprised your not interested in going.
Tim: You know my Mom said the exact same thing.
Arshell: She's right you know.
[Cut outside to Drake Industries]
[Cut to inside Drake Industries]
Random women: Welcome children. Since 1969 Drake Industries, INC has been dedicated to providing innovative materials for manufacturing, military defense, bio-medical and chemical research and technology. We are a leading global manufacturer.
Tim: Yawn, boring.
[Arshell nudges Tim's arm hard]
Tim: Ow
Arshell: Quiet
Random Woman: Drake Industries operates about one hundred and ten major manufacturing and seven research and development facilities worldwide.
Ethan Drake: Actually it's one hundred and twelve major manufacturing and ten research and development facilities worldwide, but who's counting.
Random Woman: Oh, Mr. Drake I wasn't expecting you.
Ethan Drake: Welcome children, I am very happy you all have come today.
?????: Ahem
Ethan Drake: Sorry, this young man right here is my son Thomas.
Thomas: Today is a day.
Ethan Drake: That's right, because today I test out the companies latest ________. Let me ask you all a question, have you ever wondered what is out their in the universe? Go further were no man have gone before? Well that's what we're trying to find out.
Thomas: We're creating interstellar travel!
[The group of students look at one another]
Arshell: Whoa
Tim: OK, now I'm interested.
Ethan: And today you will be the first people in the public eye to witness this extraordinary event. Now if you would please follow me.
[We see Arshell cutting in front of the other students]
Arshell: Excuse me Mr. Drake sir, Arshell Dixion, um, how exactly this this idea came to you and how do you plan on doing this?
Tim: There she goes again.
Ethan: Well I'm glad you asked, you see three months ago one of my scientist discovered a wormhole that apparently lead to a completely new dimension.
Arshell: Really?
Ethan: That's right, but to prove that it will truly be a success, we build a satellite and launched it in space through the wormhole and once activated the satellite will open a gate from our position to it's.
Arshell: Through our position where?
[Ethan points at something]
Ethan: Through that.
[Cut to the shot of a portal]
[The students gases in amazement]
Arshell: Is that like a portal?
Thomas: It is, the satellite is connected to the portal door, so when the satellite activates it will open a doorway from its location through the portal.
Thomas: And we have one of NASA's bravest astronauts to participate on the voyage.
[Thomas points at someone]
Thomas: Brad Banner himself.
[Cut to Brad Banner's face]
Random Girl 1: Did he say Brad Banner!
Random Girl 2: AAAAAAHHHHHH he's such a hunk.
Random Girl 3: I know right!
Random Girl 4: We love you Brad!
[Brad looks up at the crowd and waves at them]
Every girl in the crowd: AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH
Tim: Now you got hem started.
[A voice from a speaker starts talking]
Voice 1: Mr. Drake sir we are ready to begin.
Ethan: Ah that's my cue, I better be going now, let's go Thomas.
Thomas: Actually Dad, I think I'll stay up here with the other students.
[Ethan starts having confused look on his face]
[Thomas stairs back at his father]
Ethan: Very well then, any children please enjoy the test, it's going to be something you'll never forget.
[ Ethan walks off to the control room]
[Brad gets into his astronaut suit and everyone clears the room the portal is in]
Scientist: We're ready to be begin.
Ethan: Do it, activate the satellite.
[Scientist presses a button to activate the satellite]
[Cut to the satellite floating in space and pan in]
[A light starts blinking on the satellite and a beam of light shoots from it and creates a doorway.]
[Cut to Drake Industries where and alarm on the portal starts going off. The portal opens]
Ethan: Alright Brad, go on through.
[Brad looks up at Ethan Drake and gives him a thumbs up and heads through the portal]
[Brad makes it to the other side]
Brad: Alright, I made it through the portal.
Scientist: Sir he made it through.
[Cut to a monitor hooked to a webcam in Brad's helmet where everyone can see]
Scientist: Ok Brad do you see anything.
Brad: Nothing really, nothing but space and....wait.
Brad: Is that a planet?
Ethan: A planet!
[Cut to monitor showing the planet]
Random Person 1: A new planet.
Random Person 2: Incredible.
Random Person 3: Mr. Drake has done it again.
Arshell: This is insane, Tim do you see this,can you believe this.
Tim: I'm seeing, but I'm still trying to believe.
Arshell: They not only perfected interstellar travel, but they discovered a new planet.
Thomas: Well, Well.
[Tim and Arshell both looks at Thomas]
Thomas: He was actually capable of pulling it off, and here I thought he couldn't.
[Cut back to Brad in space]
Brad: Wait somethings wrong.
Ethan: What is it Brad?
Brad: The planet....it's cracking?
Ethan: Cracking, what you mean cracking?
Brad: It's like what I said it's...Oh god!
[A thunderous explosion erupted from the planet and a light glistened]
[Brad covers his eyes]
[Cut back to Drake Industries, everyone is covering their eyes from the blinding light]
Arshell: I can't see a thing.
Tim: Me either.
Ethan: Brad are you there?
[Cut back to space]
[The lights starts fading]
Brad: Yeah I'm still here, I can start to see again.
Brad: “gasp”
Brad: The planet is gone.
Ethan: WHAT!
[Cut to the destroyed planet]
Brad: The planet is destroyed!
Ethan: How can that be, a planet can't just destroy itself out of nowhere.
Brad: Hey I see something else coming.
[Cut back to the destroyed planet]
[Colored lights rushed towards Brad]
Brad: Something's coming towards me, pull me back in.
[Cut back to Drake Industries, inside the control room]
Ethan: You heard him, pull him back in.
Scientist 1: Yes sir.
[Scientist pushes button to activate crane mechanism to pull Brad back]
[Brad starts getting pulled back]
[The colored lights are coming closer to Brad and the portal]
Brad: I'm close to the portal, get ready to close it.
[Brad is in the door way of the portal, then one of the lights hits him and knocks him out]
[Hundreds of colored lights scattered around the facility]
Ethan: What in the world?
Ethan: Close the doors NOW!
[Scientist 1 pushes a button to close the door, the portal door closes]
Ethan: Someone escort the children out of the building.
Random Women: Yes, children come this way.
[Thomas looked as the students as they are escorted outside]
[Thomas turns around to go to the control room]
[One of the light attacked Thomas]
Thomas: AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!
[Tim stops and turns around, looks up, and see's Thomas body floating in a purple shadowy fire]
[Tim turns his head right and a yellow light coming towards him]
Tim: AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!
[Tim passes out]
To Be Continued....
[Ease in more in the city]
Narrator: Ok think of this scenario, you a normal kid, well teenager and you just live a normal little life. You go to school, have friends, get grounded by your parents you know the usual stuff, but imagine one day that all that change.
[A car gets thrown into a building]
[We people running in the streets]
Policemen: Hurry, everyone get out of this area.
[Cut to a flying figure throwing fiery dark ball of flames at a car]
[Cut and pander down to a man in a costume and a little boy hiding behind the car]
Narrator: Ok now you see that guy in the cool costume that's me Tim Solomon and that kid besides me well it's someone that I was supposed to safe, well it safe to tell you that we both need saving by this shadowy flying figure.
[Pander up onto the shadowy figure]
Shadowy Figure: HA HA HA HA what happened to all that big talk about being a hero.
[Shadowy figure throws another fiery dark ball of flames]
Shadowy Figure: But all I see is a coward.
[Tim looks at the little boy with tears in his eyes]
[Kid looks terrified]
Tim: Hey kid look at me.
[Kid looks at Tim]
Tim: Don't worry, I'm going to get us out of this, we're going to be fine.
Shadowy Figure: Don't worry your deaths will be quick and painless.
Tim Narrates: Yeah so as you can see I'm in a bit of a pickle right now. Hard to believe what could happen in two days.
TWO DAY AGO
[Tim yarns]
Voice: Tim hurry up, you don't want to be late for school today.
Tim: Alright mom I'm getting ready now.
Tim: Another day, another boring life of Timothy M. Solomon
Tim: Later mom, I'm out!
Mom: Hold it young man
Mom: You forgot your lunch.
[Tim opens the bag and sniff in it]
Tim: Mmm baloney and cheese, my favorite. Thanks.
Mom: Now I want you to enjoy yourself on this trip to Drake Industries and actually learn something there.
Tim: Aw come on mom you know Arshell is the one that into that stuff.
Mom: And she has a good reason, Drake Industries creates some of the latest technology, technology that may I remind you, you have crammed up in your room.
Tim: Yeah, but that doesn't mean I have any interest on how they make it.
Mom: Just go boy.
[Tim opens the and pops his head open]
[He looks left and right on my side of the street]
Tim: Clear for take off.
[Tim goes out side and closes the door behind him]
[Tim crosses the sidewalk to the other side to walk to school]
[Tim looks around nervously]
[Tim starts having a calm face]
Tim: Phew looks like the coast is...
[Someone whistle's in the background]
Tim: clear...oh really.
[Tim turns in head to the right side of the street]
[He see's a teenager with a blue shirt leaning on a tree eying him down]
[The teenager starts coming towards Tim]
[Tim instantly starts running]
[The teenager with a blue shirt starts running after him]
[teenager with a blue shirt chases after Tim throughout the neighborhood]
[Tim hops a fence]
[teenager with a blue shirt hops the same fence]
[A dog starts barking]
Teenager with a blue shirt: Hey..whoa, whoa, hey!
[ Teenager with a blue shirt hopes back over the fence]
[Teenager with a blue shirt looks back]
[A dog barks on the other side of the fence]
Dog: Woof, woof,woof,woof
Teenager with a blue shirt: Get lost you stupid dog.
[Pan back to see Tim hiding behind a tree]
Tim: Good boy Rex, knew offering to walk that dog would come in handing one day.
[Tim runs towards another fence and hops over it]
[Cut and pan into Philly State High School]
[Cut to a teenage girl at her looker garbing some books]
[She closes her looker door]
Tim: ARSHELL!
Arshell: Ah!...Jesus Tim don't scare me like that.
Tim: Sorry...about...that.
Arshell: It's Ace again isn't.
Tim: How...can..you tell.
Arshell: Ace have been on you for how many years, I think I can tell when your running out of trouble.
Tim: Well not this time, this time I feel like I dodged him this time.
Ace: Hey Solomon!
[Tim has a shocked look on his face]
Tim: Oh god really?
[Tim turns around and see's Ace marching towards him with any angry face on him]
Tim: Ace man I...
[Ace grabs him and shoves Tim into the lookers]
Ace: You think it's funny what you did with that little stunt with that dog.
Tim: What that, hey don't blame me your not good with dogs like I am.
[Ace shoves Tim in the lookers again]
Ace: Well, Well, looks like we have a funny man over here.
Ace: When I'm done rearranging your face it won't be a a laughing matter anymore.
[Ace balls up his fist and pulls back]
[Arshell grabs Ace's arm]
Arshell: Ok Ace that's enough, I will get the teachers if you don't stop.
[Ace looks at Arshell and looks back at Tim]
[Ace let's Tim go]
[Ace looks at Arshell]
Ace: Your lucky your cute
[Ace looks back at Tim]
Ace: And you got off lucky this time.
[Ace walks away]
Tim: Thanks, I owe you one.
Aarshell: Don't mention it,
[They both start walking to class]
Arshell: So are you ready for the big trip today.
Tim: Don't remind me, I would rather take a five page essay on Jupiter then go on this stupid trip.
Tim: Interested in the final product not how they make it. That's your business. Your the one who's interested in that stuff.
Arshell: Drake Industries creates some of the latest technology and for someone who has their technology crammed up in your room I'm surprised your not interested in going.
Tim: You know my Mom said the exact same thing.
Arshell: She's right you know.
[Cut outside to Drake Industries]
[Cut to inside Drake Industries]
Random women: Welcome children. Since 1969 Drake Industries, INC has been dedicated to providing innovative materials for manufacturing, military defense, bio-medical and chemical research and technology. We are a leading global manufacturer.
Tim: Yawn, boring.
[Arshell nudges Tim's arm hard]
Tim: Ow
Arshell: Quiet
Random Woman: Drake Industries operates about one hundred and ten major manufacturing and seven research and development facilities worldwide.
Ethan Drake: Actually it's one hundred and twelve major manufacturing and ten research and development facilities worldwide, but who's counting.
Random Woman: Oh, Mr. Drake I wasn't expecting you.
Ethan Drake: Welcome children, I am very happy you all have come today.
?????: Ahem
Ethan Drake: Sorry, this young man right here is my son Thomas.
Thomas: Today is a day.
Ethan Drake: That's right, because today I test out the companies latest ________. Let me ask you all a question, have you ever wondered what is out their in the universe? Go further were no man have gone before? Well that's what we're trying to find out.
Thomas: We're creating interstellar travel!
[The group of students look at one another]
Arshell: Whoa
Tim: OK, now I'm interested.
Ethan: And today you will be the first people in the public eye to witness this extraordinary event. Now if you would please follow me.
[We see Arshell cutting in front of the other students]
Arshell: Excuse me Mr. Drake sir, Arshell Dixion, um, how exactly this this idea came to you and how do you plan on doing this?
Tim: There she goes again.
Ethan: Well I'm glad you asked, you see three months ago one of my scientist discovered a wormhole that apparently lead to a completely new dimension.
Arshell: Really?
Ethan: That's right, but to prove that it will truly be a success, we build a satellite and launched it in space through the wormhole and once activated the satellite will open a gate from our position to it's.
Arshell: Through our position where?
[Ethan points at something]
Ethan: Through that.
[Cut to the shot of a portal]
[The students gases in amazement]
Arshell: Is that like a portal?
Thomas: It is, the satellite is connected to the portal door, so when the satellite activates it will open a doorway from its location through the portal.
Thomas: And we have one of NASA's bravest astronauts to participate on the voyage.
[Thomas points at someone]
Thomas: Brad Banner himself.
[Cut to Brad Banner's face]
Random Girl 1: Did he say Brad Banner!
Random Girl 2: AAAAAAHHHHHH he's such a hunk.
Random Girl 3: I know right!
Random Girl 4: We love you Brad!
[Brad looks up at the crowd and waves at them]
Every girl in the crowd: AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH
Tim: Now you got hem started.
[A voice from a speaker starts talking]
Voice 1: Mr. Drake sir we are ready to begin.
Ethan: Ah that's my cue, I better be going now, let's go Thomas.
Thomas: Actually Dad, I think I'll stay up here with the other students.
[Ethan starts having confused look on his face]
[Thomas stairs back at his father]
Ethan: Very well then, any children please enjoy the test, it's going to be something you'll never forget.
[ Ethan walks off to the control room]
[Brad gets into his astronaut suit and everyone clears the room the portal is in]
Scientist: We're ready to be begin.
Ethan: Do it, activate the satellite.
[Scientist presses a button to activate the satellite]
[Cut to the satellite floating in space and pan in]
[A light starts blinking on the satellite and a beam of light shoots from it and creates a doorway.]
[Cut to Drake Industries where and alarm on the portal starts going off. The portal opens]
Ethan: Alright Brad, go on through.
[Brad looks up at Ethan Drake and gives him a thumbs up and heads through the portal]
[Brad makes it to the other side]
Brad: Alright, I made it through the portal.
Scientist: Sir he made it through.
[Cut to a monitor hooked to a webcam in Brad's helmet where everyone can see]
Scientist: Ok Brad do you see anything.
Brad: Nothing really, nothing but space and....wait.
Brad: Is that a planet?
Ethan: A planet!
[Cut to monitor showing the planet]
Random Person 1: A new planet.
Random Person 2: Incredible.
Random Person 3: Mr. Drake has done it again.
Arshell: This is insane, Tim do you see this,can you believe this.
Tim: I'm seeing, but I'm still trying to believe.
Arshell: They not only perfected interstellar travel, but they discovered a new planet.
Thomas: Well, Well.
[Tim and Arshell both looks at Thomas]
Thomas: He was actually capable of pulling it off, and here I thought he couldn't.
[Cut back to Brad in space]
Brad: Wait somethings wrong.
Ethan: What is it Brad?
Brad: The planet....it's cracking?
Ethan: Cracking, what you mean cracking?
Brad: It's like what I said it's...Oh god!
[A thunderous explosion erupted from the planet and a light glistened]
[Brad covers his eyes]
[Cut back to Drake Industries, everyone is covering their eyes from the blinding light]
Arshell: I can't see a thing.
Tim: Me either.
Ethan: Brad are you there?
[Cut back to space]
[The lights starts fading]
Brad: Yeah I'm still here, I can start to see again.
Brad: “gasp”
Brad: The planet is gone.
Ethan: WHAT!
[Cut to the destroyed planet]
Brad: The planet is destroyed!
Ethan: How can that be, a planet can't just destroy itself out of nowhere.
Brad: Hey I see something else coming.
[Cut back to the destroyed planet]
[Colored lights rushed towards Brad]
Brad: Something's coming towards me, pull me back in.
[Cut back to Drake Industries, inside the control room]
Ethan: You heard him, pull him back in.
Scientist 1: Yes sir.
[Scientist pushes button to activate crane mechanism to pull Brad back]
[Brad starts getting pulled back]
[The colored lights are coming closer to Brad and the portal]
Brad: I'm close to the portal, get ready to close it.
[Brad is in the door way of the portal, then one of the lights hits him and knocks him out]
[Hundreds of colored lights scattered around the facility]
Ethan: What in the world?
Ethan: Close the doors NOW!
[Scientist 1 pushes a button to close the door, the portal door closes]
Ethan: Someone escort the children out of the building.
Random Women: Yes, children come this way.
[Thomas looked as the students as they are escorted outside]
[Thomas turns around to go to the control room]
[One of the light attacked Thomas]
Thomas: AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!
[Tim stops and turns around, looks up, and see's Thomas body floating in a purple shadowy fire]
[Tim turns his head right and a yellow light coming towards him]
Tim: AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!
[Tim passes out]
To Be Continued....
I have decided to something completely different from what I usually do. I have decided to get into more writing, this is the first time I really wrote anything to this capacity. So to start it off I written the first draft of the Voltage narrative.
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You've got the format down, and the plot seems to be solid. Keep it up!